Monday, April 14, 2008

First Time (5)

In looking back I realize
The first time is a measure
I'll use to weigh my memories
That tommorrow I will treasure

First kiss, first date
First phone call
First one to hold my hand

First time to feel
The kind of love
I hardly understand

Yet after careful viewing
If it won't hold up to light
I'll have another " first time"
To try and get it right
( i used abcb rhyme scheme,)

2 comments:

G. Latman said...

You are supposed to tell me what poetic devices you are using and in which line. Read the instructions.

G. Latman said...

This is not an abcb rhyme scheme as you have presented it.